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PostSubject: Violetta City arc 1: Rafa   Sun Aug 29, 2010 4:52 pm

Rafa was aged 16. A very young age to start a life of piracy.
He had no crew whatsoever, but he had the motivation to get one.
Rafa had started training himself since the age of 6, when his mother was killed.
He was a very caring kid. He has superhuman strength. Not much, but he's pretty fast too. And he can jump pretty high.
Well, this morning he left on his trip.
First destination, Violetta City. He was going there to find a navigator. It was pretty much the only other island he'd ever been to.
He docked.
In the distance, he saw a group of girls.
'Do any of you know how to navigate a ship?' Rafa walked up to them and asked.
'Only me.' answered the one in front.
'Would you mind joining my crew then?' Rafa asked.
'You'll have to beat me in a fight.' replied the leader. 'My name is Hariette.'
'My name is Rafa.' replied Rafa. 'I'd be happy to.'
'Well then...' Hariette said, as she clenched her fist.
'Let's go!' yelled Hariette as she ran at Rafa.
Rafa just simply grabbed her fist in midair and threw her to the ground.
'Too easy.' said Rafa.
'I'm not joining...but I'll give up Vars. Take her!' replied Hariette.
'What!?' yelled Vars.
'Well, you're useless anyway, you can't fight, and you have no special talents.' said Hariette.
'Fine!' Vars said as she kicked Hariette out of the way.
'Let's fight for it, you're not too tired I hope.' Vars said, as her hand lit up in flames.
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PostSubject: Re: Violetta City arc 1: Rafa   Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:01 pm

I just noticed this mistake you always do.
I looked at past posts and you do it there too.
You say "he's" instead of "his".
He's means he is.

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PostSubject: Re: Violetta City arc 1: Rafa   Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:10 pm

Seriously? I never noticed...I'll probably still do it though.
But doesn't he's also show ownership.

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PostSubject: Re: Violetta City arc 1: Rafa   Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:03 am

SomebodyUDon'tKnow wrote:
Seriously? I never noticed...I'll probably still do it though.
But doesn't he's also show ownership.
No, his shows ownership.

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